By Neel Anil Panicker

Are you single?
Beg your pardon, what is it that you just said?

I said what you just heard which is I asked whether a lady as beautiful and charming as you is taken, engaged, disengaged, or some other variation of the same that alludes to the same?
Hypothetically speaking if I am one or the other of these fanciful expressions that you use to so eloquently to establish my existent or non-existent marital and/or social credentials, then what, if may ask, is that you propose to do further?
Well, in that case, I intend to propose to you and as a first step towards that,  invite you to join me for a cup of coffee.
I am sorry but that is not my cup of tea.

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10 thoughts on “neelwrites/readytomingle?/sixsentencestories/fiction/03/05/2018

  1. UP

    Good six. Welcome back. We’ve missed you

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    1. Sorry I was away from the challenge for a couple of weeks. It is always my great pleasure to be a part of this wonderful community. And thanks a lot, UP.


  2. valj2750

    I guess she put him in his place. He could have been a bit more subtle, don’t you think? I always enjoy reading your stories.

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    1. Yes, that’s what i too think. The guy could have been a little more suave in going about it. Thanks and glad that you enjoy reading ,my stories. You’ve made my day, Val.

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  3. This is an interesting interchange of conversation leading up to a dead end. Maybe he should try a different approach in the future and learn a little more about her interests first.
    Good SSS.

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  4. I have to admire him for his boldness and honesty! That might work with some girls, and is certainly better than some of the lame pick-up lines we’ve heard. It would have made me laugh, but apparently she didn’t find him all that charming. Good vignette!


  5. great six keith! You seem to be able to put together a complete story in a very short space!

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    1. Oh God Neel…. it’s one of those instances where you thinking one name and use another. My mouth does the same thing sometimes! who knows where my head is, please forgive me

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  6. Ha! Great last word from her.

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  7. Ouch – guess she let him know what she thought of his approach. Perhaps a gentler approach next time might get him a bit more welcome.

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