neelwrites/fiction/shortstory/250words/ThurdsayPhotoPrompt/#writephoto/24/02/2017

beneath-the-bridge

WATER UNDER THE BRIDGE  (250 words)

By Neel Anil Panicker

 “Heard they narrowly missed you at Coimbatore?”

Pulsar Suni stretched his legs; a rock slided off the stony edges.

That was close. He had heard footsteps just after midnight. Had just about time to sneak out and scale through the outhouse walls.

He pressed the phone to his ears and spoke, ‘I need…’

The voice on the other end cut him short.

“The police are scouring all over, every district, taluka, ward, road and lane. You have no choice but to give up”.

“Where are you”, the voice prodded on.

‘In a tunnel, under some bridge, a few miles from Sengottai, bordering Kerala.’

The phone went silent for a second. Pulsar Suni bent down and caught his reflection in the flowing stream.

He coudn’t recognize himself. Gone was sturdy oak of a young man with ever vigilant eyes that gleamed like high voltage bulbs; instead what stared back was a pale, near emaciated old man with silvery hair and bed-ridden eyes that looked perilously close to popping out of their sockets any moment.

The phone buzzed again. “This time I am speaking as Advocate Sudhakaran of Kerala High Court. Orders are to ‘shoot at sight’. Here is what you do. Tomorrow, at lunch time, come via the back gates of Ernakulam District Court. I will be in my chamber with your surrender application. You’ll breathe easy in judicial custody.”

The phone went dead. Pulsar Suni spat out, ‘I should have killed her, that actress bitch instead of just raping her”.

(c)neelanilpanicker2017 #fiction # short story # 250 words

Thursday Photo Prompt – Bridge #writephoto

Immense thanks to the scintillating Sue Vincent for hosting

this Thursday Photo Prompt Weekly 250 word Challenge at https://scvincent.com/2017/02/23/thursday-photo-prompt-bridge-writephoto/

10 thoughts on “neelwrites/fiction/shortstory/250words/ThurdsayPhotoPrompt/#writephoto/24/02/2017

    1. So glad you liked this, Sis.

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  1. Another hard-hitting story, Neel.

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  2. You created a certain ruthlessness in this Neel, so well done on that score…

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  3. 😮 gosh! I think I was naive in not seeing that coming. Great Job – KL ❤

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  4. Eager to read on, you write so wonderfully that each story I’ve read on your blog has had me captivated and left me wanting to read on.

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    1. Thank you. You are very kind with your comments.
      Have a nice day.

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      1. My pleasure and I’m hoping you will continue with the stories Neel as I actually want to know what happens next.

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