neelwrites/dimlights/sundayphotofiction/200words/18/11/2018

https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2018/11/17/sunday-photo-fiction-november-18-2018/

SPF July 8 2018 (1 of 1)

DIM LIGHTS
By Neel Anil Panicker
It’s just a bed: A rickety closet, a side table atop which straddles an improvised lampshade that emanates light just bare enough to help me navigate the oblong space that I call home.
I saunter in at hours that can at best be termed unearthly, and drag my two weary feet across and slump onto to the ‘cool as autumnal freshness ‘ satin laced bed sheets, gloriously oblivious to my surroundings.
This when I am pitch drunk.
But there are also times when I am sober, when no clients come my way, when I return empty handed–, my pockets devoid of pelfs and perks associated with my line of business.
Coincidentally, these are also the nights I go to sleep, my stomach still craving and cramping for a mongrel of food.
You might wonder, looking at me, at my fancy clothes, and also the place where I stay, that I must be loaded, that I must be happy.
Truth be told: I am not. I am but an impoverished village girl who’s housed in this room paid for by pimp whose needs as of a dozen others I fulfill every single night.
A minimal being serving maximal needs of animalistic beings.
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neelwrites/sixsentencestories/agreed/flash/fiction/15/11/2018

https://girlieontheedge1.wordpress.com/2018/11/14/its-six-sentence-story-thursday-link-up-29/

CUE WORD: AGREED

A CRIME OF PASSION
By Neel Anil Panicker

That they were two of a kind was as clear as daylight.

A fire and ice combustible combination if any there were.

That they very shortly would end up as lovers and hit the sack was also an agreed. 

All this and more was very clear if one were to browse through their hitherto deeply encrypted WhatsApp and Google Hangouts accounts, that treasure trove of digital

trail that reveals more about a person that at times even his bestie may not be privy to.

But what baffled the police and all who knew Akshay and Karishma was the extent to
which they would go to keep alive the embers of passion.
Murdering their respective spouses was definitely a new low, even by the despicable standards of human depravity.
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neelwrites/waroverlove/FridayFictioneers/flash/fiction/shortstory/100words/storystarter/13/11/2018

16 November 2018

WAR OVER LOVE

By Neel Anil Panicker

The roar from above seemed to cut through the stony bricks, and reach upto to their ears, splitting their benumbed senses with the rising cacophony.

Above them the bridge rattled as footsteps sped by, its owners’ rasping voices hurling the choicest of invectives.

Crouched in between a narrow ledge, their hands clasped in unison, eyes affixed to each others’, ears cocked to catch the slightest of decibels, Lata and her Muslim friend held their breaths as the air suddenly turned warm.

‘Looks like they’re going to burn down the bridge.’

“I couldn’t care less. We’ve already burnt all our bridges.’

 

neelwrites/FOWC/TTC/flash/fiction/200words/12/11/2018

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HORSING AROUND

By Neel Anil Panicker

“In life every moment you discover something.”

Constable Bose eyed the maquette in Detective Chacko’s hands.

‘They’re the Kelpies.’

“A what?”

Bose’s wonder struck eyes eyed the two quaint steel disformed carvings.

‘Ever been to Scotland, Bose’?

Bose’s was shorn of all words.

He knew his boss had an disarmingly insultful sense of humor.

He waited that wee bit before the next volley came.

‘How would you?’

The question was rhetorical; Bose bit his lips in exasperation.

“Sir, what’s the connection with the eight 2 am murders in our Cochin City”?

‘There is. These are no ordinary horses. They are a Scottish legend. Malevolent spirits. Known to morph into beautiful women, entrap young men, and then gobble them up.’

“Oh my God! So are you saying…”

‘Exactly. The world may have become very advanced but crime’s still steeped in tradition. The killer, and there’s just one, always leaves one behind after every murder.  A set comprises a perfect ten. So, there’s two more to go. Unless of course, he’s dealing in multiple sets.’

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neelwrites/simplycomplicated/SATURDAYMIX/flash/shortstory/storystarter/200words/10/11/2018

Saturday Mix – Opposing Forces, 10 November 2018

https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2018/11/10/saturday-mix-opposing-forces-10-november-2018/

SIMPLY COMPLCATED

By Neel Anil Panciker

‘Actually, it’s very simple. I love you, you love me. We want to get married. So, I see  no problem, right?’

Vikram looked into Isha’s eyes. They were earnest, in love, and as happy as a teddy bear’s. He didn’t have the heart to counter her. Nevertheless, he began.

“See my dear. We know that we love ourselves like crazy, that we can’t live without each other. But the question is does the world around us know that, and more importantly, does it care to even acknowledge, leave alone accept that.

‘But why do we even have to bother about the world?’, Isha persisted. It’s our lives, it’s we who have to live it, it’s to do with our happiness and joy, right’?

Vikram held her hands and said, his voice now all saturnine, “Listen, lives cannot be lived in isolation. We can never ever be islands cut off from the mainland. WE need to make a life in this society and world itself. Life and living is a sentence, however harsh it may seem to be that’s best lived and understood by mastering its alphabet, both vowels and consonants. So, beg, borrow, or steal, we, i mean the two of us need to buy their approval, or at least their acquiscence, so that our future does not end up complicated.

#neelanilpanicker #flash #fiction #shortstory  #221words #love #romance #life #relationships

neelwrites/threelinetales/haibun/09/11/2018

Three Line Tales, Week 145

Three Line Tales, Week 145

three line tales, week 145: a steam train crossing the Glenfinnan Viaduct

ROLLING ON…

Maria woke up to the roar of the steam engine and as she looked through her frost filled window the sight that greeted her was pristine, other wordly, magical to say the least.

There, laid out in front of her, was a feast for the eyes___undulating valleys covered in carpets of sheer green that was now being topped by newer ever changing coatings of pearly white fumes that floated over into the azure blue skies.

‘It’s beautiful nee it’s more, much more than beautiful’ , Maria whispered, the words, each syllabic sound, bursting out of her misty lips and wafting into the air, adding its bit to the beauty of the scene.

Mind’s s a train

one

just chugs along

churning love.

#neelanilpanicker #poem #haibun #love #train

 

 

neelwrites/anightfullofmurders/CH1-9/07/11/2018

A NIGHT FULL OF MURDERS  (CHAPTER 1-9)

CHAPTER 1

HATE YOU TO ETERNITY 

By Neel Anil Panicker

“Are you sure. I mean he’s your husband, father to your child”?

Simi stood ramrod straight, her hands firmly clasped behind her back, her eyes a cold, granite stare. When she spoke, it was as if a harsh winter morning had just smashed through the windows sills and dislodged the autumnal warmth of a late October that was resolutely refusing to die out.

‘One hundred per cent freaking sure. There’s no going back. He deserves to die.’

Completely shaken by the sheer nauseating malice in her hate fuelled voice, Akshay withdrew a couple of steps, pushing himself further into the room.

Despite the air conditioning, he found himself unbuttoning his top two shirt buttons as hot beads of sweat began to trickle down his nape.

Still lost and his mind a quagmire, he almost didn’t hear her next words.

‘Aks, are you going to stand all day and do nothing, or simply help me execute this plan’?

“What?…Oh!…yeah…yes…let me think…well…ughhh…I need a smoke…no cigarettes…will be back in a minute…”

His voice was a trail as he raced out of the room.

By the time she realised and opened her mouth to say something, he had already emptied out of the seventeenth floor flat at Jacaranada  Heights and had taken the lift that was hurtling down to the basement.

There, he half ran to his car, and lit the long awaited cigarette that he so desperately was dying for.

As the nicotine entered his bloodstream and he felt his muscles relax a bit, his mind slowly began to clear out.

It was only then that the full import of what his lover was suggesting struck him. As his mind wrestled with the dilemma, he knew in his heart of hearts what he would do.

The realization made him curse himself for having fallen in love with such a crazed woman.

CHAPTER TWO 

BLACKMAIL 

The sound of car tyres screeching on the rough asphalt made Simi sit up.
He was going out, again!
The third time since morning; his first after the threat.

The word ‘threat’ made her break out in cold sweat.
She bolted upright, raised her arms and extricated the half emptied whisky glass from the bed table, and swallowed its contents in one swig.
As the searing liquid rushed through her throat, it singed her lungs and she felt raw molten heat invade  her inner self.
Instantly, her body began to shake uncontrollably.
After what seemed an eternity and much after she had downed another glass of whisky, this time minus the appendage of any colourless water added to it, she got up from the bed and after a long cold shower, sat down with a cup of steaming coffee only to contemplate at the situation that was plaguing her.

What was it that he said he would do to her? Circulate her intimate photographs? Put it on porn sites? Make sure the whole world sees it.
Simi puffed vigorously into her cigar taking deep breaths as she did so.

The slimy blackmailing bastard! 
He had the audacity to threaten her.

Red hot rage burned inside her and Simi pursed her lips; and as her nostrils flared she tightened her grip on the glass, ultimately breaking it into two.

As the shattered shards of glass fell onto the tiled floor, its remnants spilled and formed little pools that glared at her under the reflection of the revolving chandelier.

As Simi stared down at the mess that had formed under her feet,  a resolution began to take birth in her mind.
He will pay; yes, Indraneel surely will have to pay heavily with his life for having made the threat.
Now, it was all a matter of logistics__the how and when of it___whether he would drown to death, or accidentally fall down the stairs, or find himself leaving the Earth with a noose around his neck, or worse, gulp down a glass of rum mixed with snake poison.
As her mind raced with the various possibilities, another thing also competed parallelley alongside to gain her attention: the slight matter of the inheritance that Indraneel would leave behind were he to die in the immediate future.

CHAPTER 3

THE CONTRACT

‘Make it large, no ice’, spats out Akshay as he pulls out a cigarette and raises it to his lips.

At this hour of the day, with the hour needle still hovering around ten, the bar’s all but  empty.

Blowing concentric smoke circles into the air, Akshay’s sleep deprived eyes do a 360 degree arc of the dimly lit basement place, and finally they rest on a far corner table by the window that he knows leads to the garden area.

 

Something catches his attention and as a smile creases his lips, he does a bottoms up of his first drink of the day, signals the waiter for one more, and then heads his way to the table.

 

“No small talk. Just leave a name, lay the money, and scoot. Work will be done.”

Akshay’s momentarily stumped by the stranger’s staccato no nonsense bearing;  nevertheless, he drops a wad of notes even as bends down and whispers into the man’s ears the word ‘name’s Indraneel and it doesn’t make a difference how you do it but just do it and do it fast’.

CHAPTER 4

THE LOVERS

Amruta cups her soft fingers around the wooden handle and watches as a sea of kaleidoscopic panels make concentric circles above her head.

Her gaze then falls at the umbrella rim from which cascade puffed droplets of wind-washed waters that make a splash on the rain splattered grounds below.

Her heart goes pitter patter.

Beside her, Pranay watches her watch the unfolding of Nature’s pristine glory.

His palms lock hers as waves of spasmodic delight run through the spines of the two lovers.

From a distance, and from under another umbrella, a man watches them, then spits on the earth.

CHAPTER FIVE

THE NIGHT’S AS YOUNG AS YOU MAKE IT 

Much after all the gifting and the talking and the laughing had subsided and the august gathering of Industry Titans and Young Turks in the making had broken up into small rarefied groups of twos and threes and retreated into their discreet corners, Indraneel glanced at her by from across the hallway.

Aparajita caught his eyes right, rightly read his message___the trademark gentle raising of the fingertips to his upper left collar bones.

She looked stealthily all around, and after satisfying herself that the coast was clear, she very surreptitiously threaded her way out, her ears ringing with the cacophony that permeated all around the large dome shaped inner ground floor that went by the rather exotic name La Dezirella.
‘The red gown only embellishes your beauty. You look stunning enough for me to declare that I have won the lottery of my life”.

She turned around with a startle, but heaved a sigh of relief as she looked into the smiling visage of Indraneel ___his thick lascivious eyes as they ravenously devoured every inch of her curvaceous body.
Her face flushed, her cheeks blushed; but almost instantly she composed herself to reply him, “Your insouciance is downright insultful. Is this the way an employee speaks to his bosses’ daughter? Aren’t you afraid, you kangaroo?”

To that he smiled and retorted. “I know I am a kangaroos and easy meat waiting to be ripped apart in a sanctuary that’s teeming with lions and tigers and other wild forms. But then kangaroos are swift movers, aren’t they?”

‘Prove it.’

“What?”

‘I said, prove it by making me disappear from this crowd.’

To that he simply looked at her at first; then pointing towards the outre door, whispered, “Follow me outside. This cold evening will turn warm with your presence and I__your most humble chauffeur will take you for the ride of your life”.

And with that he tiptoed out.

Within a minute, she too stepped out.

The duo’s presence, especially hers,  going absolutely unnoticed by the creme de la creme of Cochin City who had descended that freezing December evening in the coastal town touted as the Venice of the East’s most famous watering hole.

CHAPTER 6

THE KILLERS

‘I do know in our business you never say no but at least you should have consulted me once before committing yourself, Asghar Bhai’.

The man seated across the table dropped his right hand to his knee, the index finger scratching furiously through the faded blue jeans before looking up to reply, “Hey, listen to me Abdul, the call came after midnight. And it was a take it or leave kind of thing. Plus, the money’s good, damn good I must say, in fact good enough for you to clear off all your gambling debts and scoot this godammed city for ever.”

‘That’s really good news Kareem Bhai. But all I was saying is you should postpone it for a week.’

“Oh is it, big mouth? Being paid, and that too handsomely for a hit is all that should matter to you, right? Pray, tell me what difference would that have made had we executed the contract seven days hence?”

Abdul stabbed the burning end of the cigarette with his left foot and looked up before speaking, “that’s because I was all set to leave in an hour’s time for my annual week long darshan to Shirdi and now this…’

“I’m sorry you’ll need to postpone your train ticket to next week as the  person who’s given us the supari is very insistent that we execute it today itself and that too before sun down day after tomorrow and it’s exactly for that reason that he’s paying us almost thrice the market rate.”

CHAPTER 7

SOFT BLOWS THE WIND

‘WHERE THE HELL ARE U ?

Detective Chacko rubbed his eyes as he stared blankly at the Whatsapp message that displayed on his smartphone.

It took awhile for his groggy self to realize what that meant and when he did so he wondered and not for the umpteenth time the entire month of October that now was on its last breath whether his hatred for technology and all that it stands for was after all not entirely unfounded.

‘It makes man servile. Also, at times an entire ass of himself’ was what he had declared to his Man Friday Bose in the middle of an excruciatingly long all night drinking cum eating binge (no less than an high octane extended orgy), after what was a particularly torturous month long police work, one wherein all efforts seemed to have reached a dead end.

What time is it he wondered as he hoisted himself up on the bed even as his phone began to beep again.

He peered into the phone’s screen. The top right hand corner blinked 14:00.

Dammit, he muttered under his breath even as he clicked on the green button.

It was from Commissnor of Police Vincent Pala. “Get your ass up here fast. The night’s bursting with murders”

The voice on the other end sounded definitely gruffy, irritable to the core.

Even before the staccatto rendition had ended  he was a hit by an avalanche of thoughts  and in his mind’s eye zigzagged a multitude of thoughts including all things that were anathema to him, all things he had had buried long, long ago, all things that he knew only led to pain; yet, paradoxically all things he now longed for, all things he knew were missing in his despicable life, and all things he knew would keep him sane, would stop him from finding himself a mental asylum much like his father several aeons ago.

‘Five minutes, Sir. I’m on my way’.

Even before he ended the call, he’s had hauled himself from bed and was heading towards the bathroom.

Two minutes later Chacko was in his car and driving towards Tripunithara, his mind already feeling as free as a caged bird, its wings clipped.

CHAPTER 8

THE DISCOVERY  

As one just entering into teen hood, he had spent long summer months poring over spy thrillers, his appetite whetted by jaw dropping high octane adrenaline dripping tales of daring all black clad vodka consuming spyglass wielding uber spies flitting in and out of cities and continents and solving hair raising crimes, catching uber white collar fortune hunting criminals who looked as if they had just stepped out of million dollar movie sets.

Alas! How fast dreams turn to dust.  The hard rock of reality struck barely a year into his joining the police force, and now after almost three decades of sleuthing (and two divorces, three live ins and several one night slam bam thank you mams’ later,) Detective Abraham Chacko, Assistant Commissioner of Police, Crime Branch, Cochin City Police had come to the horrific, and maybe, even regrettable realisation that life including police work is not always what it promises to be; in fact it’s entirely its opposite.

And so it were that one fine Monday evening he found himself, clad in knee high military boots and spyglass in hand,  hacking his way through the dense jungles that ringed the northern periphery of Periyar Forest Reserves, in Central Kerala.

“Aaah…I guess I have hurt my leg”

Detective Chacko turned around and pointed the flashlight first at his deputy’s face, then at the ground below.

The torch beams slowly rose towards the ankles. The lens illuminated a stab of blood that had spurted out of the ankles and shone through the regimentation khakhi trousers.

He lifted the torch beam towards its owner’s face.

Sub Inspector Bose winced in pain.

‘Just a little gnash. Nothing much. It’s rocky out here. Plus, the earth’s all wet. Just go slow and fall back behind me.’

 

Detective Chacko inched forward; his deputy at his heels; the duo trudging forward, two amorphous shadows flitting in and out of the dreary dark expanse that loomed ahead.

“Sir…???”

It was Bose who first spotted it.

As Detective Chacko turned the flashlight towards two feet in front of him, the sight that greeted him sent an icy chill run down his spine.

There, in front of him, around a small depression in the ground, stood a almost six feet high monolithic all black stone spire, and just below it, on the marshy grounds, lay, smeared in blood a headless body, a body shorn of all clothes save for an underwear that covered the male genitalia.

As Bose from behind let out a half scream, Detective Chacko once more came to the horrific realisation that in life you didn’t need an opponent to bring you down, the mere sight of a certain human body would do the job just as well.

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CHAPTER 9

THE QUEST

‘Nothing much except this machete. It was lying beside the body. Also, the Forensics have picked up some prints. Shoe prints, precisely. Of size 10.’

 

“That’s not much of a start, isn’t it? Check the CCTV footage. See if there’s some some visuals.”

As the constable retreated from the room, Chacko,  Assistant Commissioner of Police, Crime Detection Department, Ernakulam District, turned his attention towards the machete.

 

A 16 inch fine blade with serrated edges at the top and a broad back that ended with a polymer grip at the end___not unlike one used by petty criminals in the region, Chacko surmised.

 

Turning towards the lone man in the second floor Room No. 2 of Crime Branch Main Office, Kochi, Chacko said, “Any leads on the murdered person, Bose?”

 

“Our men are on it. As of now all we know is that he had come with his wife and mother for a regular medical checkup at Medical Trust Hospital. The three had just stepped out of the front gate when he was attacked.”

Chacko nodded his head and pulled up a chair opposite Bose.

This was the third case the two men were tasked with barely six months into Bose’s promotion to Sub Inspector and subsequent transfer to Crime Branch unit barely seven months ago.

At that instant Chacko’s phone rang. The moment he picked it up he knew there was more bad news coming.

The voice on the other end was rushed.

“Sir, you need to come to the highway, 65th stone. It’s the one leading to Periyar. There’s a body”

Detective Chacko cursed under his breath, and slammed the phone down.

“Get the car, fast” , he barked as he raced out of his office”.

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