neelwrites/52weeksin52wordschallenge/fiction/dialogue/20/07/2017

WRITESPIRATION #124 52 WEEKS IN 52 WORDS WEEK 29

Hosted by Sacha Black at

http://sachablack.co.uk/2017/07/19/writespiration-124-52-weeks-in-52-words-week-29/

This week tell your story using dialogue only.

HANGING UP

By Neel Anil Panicker

“Why don’t you pick up the phone?”

‘What’s it? I’m busy’

“I want to speak to you.”

‘You’ve spoken enough?’

“No, I want to say something.”

‘Everything’s been said. There’s nothing more to say.’

“No, please don’t say that.”

‘It’s over.’

“Nooo…please…please talk…please…just once.”

‘It’s over.’

“Please, please…don’t say that… I’ll die”

©neelanilpanicker2017 #fiction #52words #dialogue #52weeksin52words

neelwrites/fiction/52words/secret/07/07/2017

writespiration-2017

Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.

This week your challenge is to write about:

The secret you just discovered

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What’s the truth

By Neel Anil Panicker

Sharp pain shot through Lata’s chest.

Her head felt as if someone had smashed it with a hammer.

As her body slumped onto the floor, and moments before she lost consciousness, the words of Raj, her husband of a week assaulted her ears, “I need to tell you something. I am gay”.

©neelanilpanicker2017 #fiction #52words