neelwrites/FF/flash/fiction/shortstory/28/11/2019

TURNING POINT 

By Neel Anil Panicker

“Ok, so here’s how it’ll go. At six he would leave his office. A minute later, his car would take the left turn that leads to NH 24.

At exactly, six past six, his car wheels past the roundabout. He…”

‘He sits in the backseat, left side…we speed past him at the spot where the arrow signal is and spray with automatic weapons, right?’

Simi looked at the two black suited mustachioed men who stood in attention from across her desk.

“One more thing. Empty your entire magazine on him. He deserves a spectacular death. After all, he’s my husband.”

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14 thoughts on “neelwrites/FF/flash/fiction/shortstory/28/11/2019

  1. That’s the kind of wife a man needs. Even in extreme moments she’s thinking of his honour

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    1. Yeah, that’s sarcastic but what’s revenge without a size of sarcasm.

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  2. That’s an extreme way to get rid of a husband, I wonder what he’s done to deserve it.

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    1. Yeah, that’s sarcastic but what’s revenge without a size of sarcasm.

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  3. Dear Neel,

    She couldn’t just divorce him? Seems a bit extreme. But, then I get it. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  4. Blimey, I wonder what he did to deserve that? Unexpected take on the photo prompt! 🙂

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  5. Life’s itself so very unexpected, isn’t it? Glad you liked the unexpectedness of this, Susan.

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  6. Must have done something unforgivable to be gotten rid of so definitely…

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  7. I’m sure he earned what he’s about to get.

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  8. She thought she’d have a shot at sorting out her marriage – a magazine full!

    Here’s my tale!

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  9. Uhoh! Chillingly planned. I wonder what he did to cause her to hate him.

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