neelwrites/lovebirds/sundayfiction/story/11/06/2018

LOVE BIRDS

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By Neel Anil Panicker

“It’s PRIYA. P…R…I…Y…A.  So stop calling me ‘Flamingo’.”

‘Because you are one.’

Priya looked at Raj, whose hands kept flitting in and out of the side pocket of her little blue dress, reaching places whose existence the nineteen year old wasn’t even aware of.

“Oh! is that so? Tell me, how did you arrive at that deduction”?

The two were at the National Zoo and leaning against the parapet that overlooked an oasis of blue waters surrounded by thick bushy outgrowth all around it.

Wednesday, at this hour of the afternoon, a quarter past three, was, even by Delhi’s standards, pretty languid.

The animals and birds, big and small, and their watchers, the men who were tasked with the upkeep of what was arguably the nation’s best kept sanctuary were taking their much needed siesta, away from public glare and scrutiny, safely tucked in their nests, homes, hearths or wherever it was that they felt comfy and relaxed.

Turning around, Raj, his hands hidden from public gaze, replied, “That’s ‘bcoz you’re tall, shapely, have a slender figure, have a very glowing lush apple like face, and ….”

‘And what, dear Raj? Priya vollied, her voice suddenly putting on a flirtatious honey dipped tone.

Raj dug his eyes deep into hers before retorting, “And also b’coz you have long, very long endless legs”.

Priya blushed before retorting, : Don’t forget; I have a long, sharp beak too”.

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Sunday Photo Fiction – June 10, 2018

https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2018/06/09/sunday-photo-fiction-june-10-2018/

5 thoughts on “neelwrites/lovebirds/sundayfiction/story/11/06/2018

  1. Mike

    I felt that I should not be listening in to this conversation, until that word b’coz arrived. I enjoyed the descriptive image of a languid afternoon in Delhi

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  2. Love that last line — sounds like she likes the nice words, but he’d better be careful or he’ll get the brunt of her beak!

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  3. Very clever of Priya! her beak can prove fatal for him

    Like

  4. I think Raj may have taken on more than he can handle!

    Like

  5. Awwe, a cute one instead of a crime story from you Neel. Loved it.

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