neelwrites/alwaysup/fiction/shortstory/flash/19/05/2018

ALWAYS UP

By Neel Anil Panicker

“And what’s the guarantee it’s going to go up?”

‘Damnt it!!! Rajesh always wondered whether his wife was a born fool or turned one after marriage.

Employing his best milk and honey voice he volleyed, “My dear wife, life you know comes with no guarantees. At least, that’s what I thought until you came into my life. You’ve managed to change all that. Look at you. You’ve been a revelation. Haven’t you been delivering on your promise of giving me everlasting bliss day in and day out. Likewise, take it from me, this property will give us the same.’

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2 thoughts on “neelwrites/alwaysup/fiction/shortstory/flash/19/05/2018

  1. I enjoyed this. I loved the line where he wondered if she’d been born a fool or turned one after marriage. I can see this happening. I fear they are headed for disaster.

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