neelwrites/alwaysup/fiction/shortstory/flash/19/05/2018

Posted on by neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS

ALWAYS UP

By Neel Anil Panicker

“And what’s the guarantee it’s going to go up?”

‘Damnt it!!! Rajesh always wondered whether his wife was a born fool or turned one after marriage.

Employing his best milk and honey voice he volleyed, “My dear wife, life you know comes with no guarantees. At least, that’s what I thought until you came into my life. You’ve managed to change all that. Look at you. You’ve been a revelation. Haven’t you been delivering on your promise of giving me everlasting bliss day in and day out. Likewise, take it from me, this property will give us the same.’

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2 thoughts on “neelwrites/alwaysup/fiction/shortstory/flash/19/05/2018”

  1. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist
    May 19, 2018 at 1:46 am

    I enjoyed this. I loved the line where he wondered if she’d been born a fool or turned one after marriage. I can see this happening. I fear they are headed for disaster.

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    1. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS
      May 19, 2018 at 2:25 am

      Thanks a lot, Irene.

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      Reply

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