neelwrites/mixedlove/tanla/poem/13/05/2018

Posted on by neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS

LOVE MIX-UP  

By Neel Anil Panicker

Bewitched by beauty

He professed undying love

She waltzed through life

Disowning him off all peace

His life is now but a trance.

#neelanilpanicker #poem #tanka #dream #belong

Colleen’s 2018 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 82 – BELONG & DREAM #SynonymsOnly

Colleen’s 2018 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 82 – BELONG & DREAM #SynonymsOnly

 

2 thoughts on “neelwrites/mixedlove/tanla/poem/13/05/2018”

  1. Colleen Chesebro
    May 13, 2018 at 7:33 pm

    Well done, Neel. You drew me in on those last lines! Wow!

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    1. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS
      May 14, 2018 at 2:09 am

      Thanks Colleen

      Liked by 1 person

      Reply

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