neelwrites/mixedlove/tanla/poem/13/05/2018

LOVE MIX-UP  

By Neel Anil Panicker

Bewitched by beauty

He professed undying love

She waltzed through life

Disowning him off all peace

His life is now but a trance.

#neelanilpanicker #poem #tanka #dream #belong

Colleen’s 2018 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 82 – BELONG & DREAM #SynonymsOnly

Colleen’s 2018 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 82 – BELONG & DREAM #SynonymsOnly

 

2 thoughts on “neelwrites/mixedlove/tanla/poem/13/05/2018

  1. Well done, Neel. You drew me in on those last lines! Wow!

    Liked by 1 person

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