THE MEETING
By Neel Anil Panicker
Akhtar had his day job__ a manager at the Bank of India main branch. Come evenings, thrice a month, he would bring home a blank cheque leaf, plus a fascimile signature of its owner, usually a rich account holder.
Khadim, the calligraphic expert, would reproduce the signature and write a fancy seven figure amount onto it.
A week later, some six hundred kilomteres away, Haider, a school teacher, would receive the leaf, and pass it onto Taimur, a cashier in a nondescript bank branch who would disburse the specified amount.
The quartet met once a month to distribute the spoils.
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Three times a month? He’s going to get caught, for sure
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They always do, my friend.
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Lovely little tale of petty criminals.
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Thanks a lot, Ceayr
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Dear Neel
Well constructed story of a counterfeit ring. Good job.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks a lot, Rochelle
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7 figure amount indeed!
Ultra-rich account-holders as many don’t have much in their bank-accounts…
Tough to escape detection! 🙂
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Very true. Sooner or later they are going to get caught. Thanks a lot, Anita.
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It’s just a matter of time methinks! Enjoy it while you can. Nice one Neel.
Click to read my 99 words!
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Thanks a lot, and i will surely read yours.
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They all get caught in the end. Nice use of the prompt Neel.
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Sure, they all do. Thanks a lot, Kelly
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Nice little earner while it lasts. Made me remember “Catch Me If You Can”.
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Yes, indeed. Thanks a lot, Jilly.
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You can’t spend the money in prison.
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True, but you can once you come out, but then that would depend on how smartly and safely you have managed to hide it from its seekers.
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That would be touchy and hopefully worth a decade or so in the slam.
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Greed always catcheth the thief. Once you put your hand in the till a few times and get away with it, it no doubt becomes harder to stop.
xx Rowena
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Very true, Rowena. Greed is always their comeuppance.
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Oh God!
Great storytelling, Neel.
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Thanks a zillion, Moon.
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Make hay while the sun shines, I suspect the big black cloud is imminent. Hope they’ve found a safe hiding place to stash the loot.
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Yes, they seem to be smart but then don’t they always get caught.
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Invisible men passing the money from hand to hand round the table…entertaining take on the prompt, Neel
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Thanks a lot, Penny.
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Enjoy it while it lasts, gents… the time will come when all will fall flat!
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Thanks Dale.
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Sounds like they have everything planned … for now. Will it be human error that catches up with them? A keen clerk in one of the banks? One of the ganag getting greedy? A crime thriller awaits. Nice tale Neel
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Thanks a lot, Lynn.
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My pleasure
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Reminded me of crime films. Great job.
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Thanks a lot, Lisa.
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LOL I feat he will be caught.
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Hmm…looks like.Thanks Irene.
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The story has another layer that is obvious and unstated. Well crafted.
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Quite a set-up. Wonder how long it will last? Well done.
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Thanks for the warning, I won’t be putting my millions into that bank.😉
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You are welcome, Michael.
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A neat little arrangement. What could possibly go wrong? Enter Inspector Sharma….
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Yes, it is a perfect set up for our sleauth’s entry.
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I meant sleuth. Ah, the perils of predictive texting.
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That’s it Neel, now I’m gonna take all my cash out of the bank and buy bitcoins. Thanks for the safety message.
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You are welcome. I guess I too and off to the bank, Dan.
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Very creative use of the prompt and enjoyable read. I agree with everyone else..they’re going to get caught. =)
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Thanks lot, Brenda. I too think so.
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He’s not very wise if he’s writing seven figure amounts, people will notice those large amounts going missing for sure. Hope they get caught. Preferably at their meeting point.
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