neelwrites/somethingsmelly/flashfictionfortheaspiringwriters/shortstory/173words/13/03/2018

SOMETHING’S SMELLY

This week’s photo prompt is provided by Enisa. Thank you Enisa!

By Neel Anil Panicker

Tell me Al, what time did you arrive?

“2. 15, Sir.”

You sure about the time?

“Well, 2 pm is lunch time here at the Fire Station. I’d just opened my box when the call came. We’re there in 15 minutes.”

What did the caller say? Did you note his name?

“Said there’s a fire at Clifton House. Didn’t leave a name, but it was a woman’s voice”.

Ok, now tell me exactly what you saw.

“I noticed a blaze. It came from the corner room. After we put it down, I went inside.”

It was then that I noticed the body. But before that I smelled it.”

What kind of smell was it, Al?

“Well, you can’t really describe the smell of charred flesh. It’s like when pork is grilled on the sides, you know. But this was different.”

How different, Al?

“This one smelled worse. Something noxious. It wasn’t that of a freshly burnt human body. It was decomposed. A bloater__that’s what we call it here.”

Thanks Al.

“Anytime, Inspector Sharma.”

#NEELANILPANICKER #FICTION #FLASHFICTIONFORASPIRINGWRITERS #SHORTSTORY#MURDER #INSPECTORSHARMACRIMESERIES #173words

https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2018/03/12/fffaw-challenge-week-of-march-13-2018/

19 thoughts on “neelwrites/somethingsmelly/flashfictionfortheaspiringwriters/shortstory/173words/13/03/2018

  1. Another beginning of a murder mystery.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. I was having char-grilled pork tonight – now you’ve put me off!

    Click to read my FFfAW!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I am sorry. Didn’t mean to. Can we do something about this!

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Burnt bloater – sounds like a murder investigation is coming up.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Al seems very relaxed about this, as though it’s not the first time he’s discovered a burnt body!! Sharma on the case again.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. michael1148humphris

    Inspector Sharma, this Al seems to know to much for my liking. Great introduction to another case for Inspector Sharma.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Something smells foul indeed! Seems like the fire was a coverup for something even more terrible. I like how you conveyed it in dialogue, and great title too.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. I never smelled a decomposing body but you seemed to describe it well. Sounds like the fire was a coverup! Great story, Neel!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Excellent, but Neel, you need to finish these countless murder mysteries that you keep starting and then leave us hanging 🙂

    Like

    1. Thanks Anurag. Maybe, i will do that for November, the novel writhing month.
      I have some 20 as of now. How about 20 stories, each 2500 words in length, Anurag?

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sound awesome. A series of detective stories featuring Inspector Sharma or one of your other detectives might not be a bad idea.

        Like

  9. Al seems to know a whole lot and hardly is he perturbed by such gory incident.

    Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

<span>%d</span> bloggers like this: