neelwrites/FF/sayingit withflowers/shortstory/100words/22/02/2018


By Neel Anil Panicker

With any other girl it would have been a non issue; a decision that’s taken in a jiffy.
But not so in the case of Sheena.


For  the first time in his fourteen month old romantic career, Albert the Stud felt ill at ease, a complete misfit.

Should she be happy with flowers? If so, how many, just one, or more?
If so, then would his regular party piece red rose do the trick or should he plunder an entire nursery?
All questions, but, with no definitive answers.
Damn it, he cursed. Why did she have to be so beautiful?

©neelanilpanicker2018 #fiction #shortstory #FRIDAYFICTIONEERS #100WORDS


23 February 2018

15 thoughts on “neelwrites/FF/sayingit withflowers/shortstory/100words/22/02/2018

  1. Moon

    I have a feeling this thing with Sheena is going to last (more) at least for her beauty.
    Nice one, Neel.

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  2. Albert has met his match it seems.

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  3. Seems like the “stud” is finally smitten himself, if he’s this discombobulated about a simple thing like flowers! Maybe a good sign for him!

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  4. He has fallen hard. Nicely captures his storm of emotions!


  5. Dear Neel,

    I fear that Albert is trying to hard. I’ll bet if he stops trying to be ‘the stud’ he’ll find out that he’s just fine the way he is. If Sheena is as beautiful on the inside as she is on the outside, any number of roses will suffice. 😉 Lovely story.




  6. Dale

    Methinks Albert is aiming “above” his station… 😉


  7. I’m sure Sheena realizes the situation he is in, and will more than encourage him to make a fool of himself.


  8. Ha! A taste of his own medicine! I like the way you name him Albert the Stud so that we know what kind of young man he is.


  9. Aha! Don Juan has met his match 🙂


  10. I think that Albert has actually fallen in love… not so much a stud anymore.


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