neelwrites/Grace/Saturday Mix – Double Take, 23 December 2017/poem/tanka/23/12/2017

Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie

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This week’s Double Take has a ‘Christmassy twist’ to it! Our homophone sets are:

presence – the state of being present
presentsgifts

and

holy – with religious significance
holey – perforated, with holes
wholly – fully, completely

GRACE

Image result for CHRIST

By Neel Anil Panicker

Your presence makes sense

God’s priceless present are they

Holy thoughts fill me

Cleansing my soul_ so holey

Wholly I submit to you.

3 thoughts on “neelwrites/Grace/Saturday Mix – Double Take, 23 December 2017/poem/tanka/23/12/2017

  1. It took me over 1,200 words to get all six homophones in. Well done.

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