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This week’s Double Take has a ‘Christmassy twist’ to it! Our homophone sets are:

presence – the state of being present
presents – gifts

and

holy – with religious significance
holey – perforated, with holes
wholly – fully, completely

GRACE

By Neel Anil Panicker

Your presence makes sense

God’s priceless present are they

Holy thoughts fill me

Cleansing my soul_ so holey

Wholly I submit to you.