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By Neel Anil Panicker
Earlier it wasn’t so the case; she loved them, the winters. The luxuriously languorous all night slumber into la la land; the achingly slow waking up to the smell of hot as molten lava garden fresh coffee, the touch of warm veined fingers on frosty cheeks, the entwining of love filled hearts and lust filled bodies.
Aaah! she could go on and on and her dream would have no end.
But end it did.
And cruelly at that.
As she stares through the icicled sheets of coldness she wonders when love went of the window.
©neelanilpanicker2017 #fiction #flash #shortstory #99words
#Friday Fictioneers
the entwining of love filled hearts What a yummy line!
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Thanks Alicia
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I liked the way the seasons mirrored her emotions. Nicely done.
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Thanks Kelly
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A cold awakening for her. Nicely done, Neel.
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Thanks Sandra
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You’ve skillfully shown that similar situations can have different effects depending on circumstances. Excellent neel.
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Thanks Keith.
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Dear Neel,
This is so touching and vividly written. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks a lot, Rochelle
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Some nice imagery in this sad story. Well done.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks a lot, Susan.
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Oh! And I was so enjoying the picture of contentment you painted!
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Wow. Like being dumped from a tank of lovely warm water into the Arctic Ocean!
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Beautifully written. The imagery was vivid. Alas, some loves are not meant to be…
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Perfect for the prompt.
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I love the way you’ve involved the senses in this story, Neel. They bring it to life. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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