neelwrites/iced/fridayfictioneers/flash/fiction/shortstory/99words/08/12/2017

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PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson

By Neel Anil Panicker

Earlier it wasn’t so the case; she loved them, the winters. The luxuriously languorous all night slumber into la la land; the achingly slow waking up to the smell of hot as molten lava garden fresh coffee, the touch of warm veined fingers on frosty cheeks, the entwining of love filled hearts and lust filled bodies.

Aaah! she could go on and on and her dream would have no end.

But end it did.

And cruelly at that.

As she stares through the icicled sheets of coldness she wonders when love went of the window.

©neelanilpanicker2017 #fiction #flash #shortstory #99words

#Friday Fictioneers

17 thoughts on “neelwrites/iced/fridayfictioneers/flash/fiction/shortstory/99words/08/12/2017

  1. the entwining of love filled hearts What a yummy line!

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  2. I liked the way the seasons mirrored her emotions. Nicely done.

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  3. A cold awakening for her. Nicely done, Neel.

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  4. You’ve skillfully shown that similar situations can have different effects depending on circumstances. Excellent neel.

    Click to read my FriFic!

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  5. Dear Neel,

    This is so touching and vividly written. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. Some nice imagery in this sad story. Well done.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  7. Oh! And I was so enjoying the picture of contentment you painted!

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  8. Wow. Like being dumped from a tank of lovely warm water into the Arctic Ocean!

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  9. Dale

    Beautifully written. The imagery was vivid. Alas, some loves are not meant to be…

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  10. I love the way you’ve involved the senses in this story, Neel. They bring it to life. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne

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