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Posted on November 22, 2017 by neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS
WHAT PEGMAN SAW

Hosted by the beautiful k rawson at https://whatpegmansaw.com/2017/11/18/san-jose-el-huayate-chiapas-mexico/

San José el Huayate, Chiapas, Mexico

GET LOST mexico

By Neel Anil Panicker

Alfred smeared the sand off his eyes and looked upwards as the mid-summer July sun shone hard on his bald as an eagle plate.

Turning around, his groggy eyes swept past the sandy stretch, past the spartan rows of thatched dwellings, a lone leafless palm tree wedeged in between, beyond the solitary battered windowless vintage-era car that stood, its apology of a bonnet looking into the sea, its waves sprouting salty froth into the jagged rocks that fronted the mile long desolate beach.

It was then that he remembered where he was- San Jose’ el Huate, Chiapas, Mexico.

A slow smile creased his thick as a ‘Subway double decker chicken sandwich’ lip.

Not bad, he mused.

Not bad at all for a fifty-year-old master international swindler who’s just broken through the high security state prison at Sacramento, over a thouand miles away in distant California.

Al stood up and wiped the dirt off his legs; the earth, fifty feet under, housing his only wordly possession__a much used pure leather Samsonite bag that contained ten million American dollars.

(C)NEELANILPANICKER2017 #WHATPEGMANSAW #FLASHFICTION #SHORSTORY #194 WORDS

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5 thoughts on “neelwrites/getlost/whatpegmansaw/fiction/flash/shortstory/194words/22/11/2017”

  1. J Hardy Carroll
    November 22, 2017 at 12:31 pm

    Sounds like quite a character!

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    1. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS
      November 22, 2017 at 2:34 pm

      Thanks a lot, HARDY.

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  2. k rawson
    November 22, 2017 at 1:38 pm

    Neel! So happy to see you!

    The build-up had such a dreamy quality, that I found myself grinning just like your character when you got to the reveal. If a person is only to have one possession–that would be a nice one!

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    1. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS
      November 22, 2017 at 2:37 pm

      Sorry i have been away pegman for a couple of weeks. Glad i am back and glad further to hear from you. Thanks for the heart warming appreciation. On the last i too agree with you, sweet K.

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  3. draliman
    November 24, 2017 at 7:58 am

    Enough money for a new life. Or maybe he’ll use it for seed money in a new scam?

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