Sunday Photo Fiction – September 10th 2017
Hosted at https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2017/09/10/sunday-photo-fiction-september-10th-2017/
BLAST FROM THE PAST
By Neel Anil Panicker
It was supposed to be their dream house. Their retirement nest. A house by the river. Add spectacular views of the early sun as it snakes past the narrow slits of exotic palm leaves, gently splashing its orange tinged red rays through diaphanous curtains on still sleepy residents safely tucked under silken bedsheets; add the very same rays receding behind lofty snow capped mountains while giving way to spectacular moonlit nights; add the gentle swirling of the crystal clear waters as it lullabies you to sleep.
Add all this, and what you get is bliss; nirvana; happiness to the power of infinity.
Alas! That was not to be. Mrs and Mr Sood’s dreams of settling down and spending the golden years of their remaining lives in Villa Paradise, (that’s what they had christened their utopia, their comfy house by the river) quickly turned to dust.
One fine morning the lady woke up to find her husband of half a century dead on the bed, the spent cartridge of a .303 bullet lay beside him.
‘They’ll come, they always come’ he used to mumble around, something she would dismiss as signs of the onset of dementia.
She peers into the muddy waters below.
‘You’re right. Always were. Spies never had it easy.’
©neelanilpanicker(2017 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED) #SPF #FICTION #SHORT STORY #neelanilpanicker #neeltheauthor
My interpretation is that he committed suicide because he didn’t want to live with dementia.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow! that’s new and i seriously didn’t think about it. It just shows that one can have as many interpretations to a story as there are readers. Thanks James.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ah, Neel, out of light comes darkness. It seems one can never escape the past. Superbly crafted, my friend.
LikeLiked by 1 person
None can escape from one’s past. Thanks Ceayr for such fulsome praise.
LikeLike
For me he was in the spy industry, and his past caught up with him.
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s what I had envisaged too. Thanks Mike.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Quite a blast indeed. You can never leave the spy game behind. Nice one.
LikeLiked by 1 person
No wonder the past has a way of catching up on you. Thanks Kelly for the appreciation.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nicely done.
LikeLike
You can never lose the past. Alas, Mr Sood knew his time would come. Good story Neel.
LikeLike