Something’s smelly
PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson
By Neel Anil Panicker
It began as a single red rose.
Delivered to her workstation; initially, only on Mondays, and then on every other day, and finally, every single day.
All placed inwards, as if the benefactor were aware of the seating arrangement of the beneficiary; the flowers, fresh and trimmed to perfection were delivered with metronomic precision within a measly thirty seconds, the time that it took for Esther to grab a cup of espresso from the office corner.
It’s only when the largesse began arriving at her doorsteps and came wrapped around
a pair of surgical blades that cold fear set in.
©neelanilpanicker2017 #FF #fiction #something’ssmelly #100words
Feeling distinctly edgy now. Very sinister, Neel.
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Thanks a lot, Sandra.
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Yes, that would definitely start to give you a sense of fear! Well played Neel.
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Thanks a lot, Lian.
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Gulp. Time to call the police, I think. Scary story.
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Truly sinister. A difficult task for this prompt. Excellent stuff.
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Thanks a lot, YS .
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what is it about these poor flowers that made people think of stalkers? Very creepy take on the prompt, Neel
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Dear Neel,
I was going to ask the question but Lynn beat me to it. Menacing flowers those. Note: The correct spelling and pronunciation is ‘espresso.’ Not to worry Americans can’t get it right, either.
Good story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation, Rochelle. And oops! how could I miss espresso!
Glad you pointed it out.
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You’re very welcome, Neel. Like I said the mistake is made all the time by Americans. I’m glad you don’t mind my nitpicking.
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Don’t know. I guess seen enough of life to now look at seemingly harmless things with well developed cynicism.
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Tiny bombs are a better idea than blades.
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Guess so but the blades would do the job as well. Thanks Reena.
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I’ve noticed a pattern in these stories based on the prompt. Stories on guilt, love, and stalkers. It’s interesting which direction the different authors take. You laid out a very chilling ending. Good work.
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Yes, even i have seen the same trend amongst writers for this prompt. I guess we writers suffer from a common malaise. Thanks a lot for your appreciation, James.
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ouuuuuuu, vicious.
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Chilling! I wonder what would happen of Esther at the end of it all.
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That’s a very scary thought even i wouldn’t dare envison, Moon.
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Ew, creepy. Love nice build before it turned dark.
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Thanks
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I don’t like this flower giver at all… I feel all icky and gross.
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If you feel so and rightfully so, then i have succeeded as a writer. Thanks Dale.
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😀
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Your sinister stranger obviously has evil intentions. Time for the lady to move and leave no forwarding address.
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Absolutely. She should run faster than a panther and in the opposite direction. Thanks.
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This does not bode well! Nice one neel.
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I know. It’s scary with a capital S. Thanks Keith. I will now go and read yours.
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Holy cow! Sinister.
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Holy cow it is! Thanks.
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Quite a creepy tale, I must say. A crisp narrative that brings out the sense of the sinister rather sharply! Well done!
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Thanks Esha.
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This definitely is NOT going to end well for her!
I love the phrase “metronomic precision” because I was a music major and this was GREAT!
You keep things fresh in the way you express yourself, Neel. I think English is doing that for you. That is GOOD. Keep up the good work! 🙂
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I am glad when astute writers like you praise my writing. Thanks, dear Kent.
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That’s a telltale sign of a crazed stalker. Hope she has her pepper spray ready. Well written, Neel. Loved the language that complemented the sinister tone of the story.
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Thanks a lot, Varad. It was very sweet of you to say that.
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Maybe he just wants one kidney for a transplant. Sick and twisted.
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Wow..talk about creepy!
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Hope the stalker develops cold feet and the lady is safe. flowers delivered within 30 seconds. that is very quick. as usual Neel a brilliant write-up.
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The guy is super fast, isn’t he? Thanks Kalps for the appreciation.
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Thanks immensely, dear Kalps.
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Well! That took an ugly turn (in a good way!)
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Gosh! That made my hair stand. Well done Neel!
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I will take that as a big compliment. Thanks a lot.
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From pruning flowers to pruning people, great intro to a murder mystery. Well done, Neel.
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Thanks a lot, Kelvin
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Hmmm, what changed to take it there? Did she switch to lattes? Well done, Neel.
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