Sunday Photo Fiction – July 16th 2017

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11 07 July 16 2017 Mike Vore Oh My Photos

© Mike Vore

By Neel Anil Panicker

The man on television was in a bad mood.

Inflation, depression, deprivation, lay offs …the words kept hurtling  out of his loud mouth faster than a prized horse’s incessant trots on racing day.

Ramnath felt a thick knot forming around his lower back; the muscles around his neck beginning to constrict.

Despite the cool wintry breeze outside, a wet dampness seeped past the dank surroundings like an unwelcome guest; a sticky fluid trickling down his rickety torso and firmly embedding itself into the hidden crevices of his grossly underweight frame.

As grainy images of further decadence infiltrated the screen, Ramnath’s already shrunken five foot something self seemed to shrivel even further; his hands and limbs turning inwards into a foetal position.

Dawn morphed into noon and then nightfall but his eyes remained static, staring listlessly into the half baked walls.

Much later, he staggered out into the open and stared listlessly at the only wealth that he ever possessed__ a half completed, fast crumbling apology of a mud house.

Then the clouds burst and drowned him in a torrent of rains.

It was then that reality struck him: a one legged cancer ridden man was persona non grata.

©neelanilpanicker2017 #fiction #SPF #theunwanted #194words


10 thoughts on “neelwrites/theunwanted/spf/fiction/194words/16/07/2017

  1. This is very sad Neel. All people should matter to someone at least. And ad individualism is valued in modern society even a one legged guy with cancer should matter. But reality can be different than theory. I hope he finds something to bring him out of his despair. Something the can bring him joy in whatever time he has left. I would like to think even in our darkest moments for people who feel the most insignificant, there is hope! Well done!

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