Sunday Photo Fiction – July 9th 2017

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205 07 July 9th 2017

© A Mixed Bag

By Neel Anil Panicker

“Hey babes, pop your head out of the window. See that blue van parked near the kerb. I’m inside it. Time’s running out. Just pop out and we scoot, ok?”

‘Great, sweetheart. Me and Ronnie…we’ll join you in a sec.’

“What? You bringing Ronnie? Gone mad or what?”

‘But what else do I do?  I can’t leave him alone and you know that.”

“Gawd, what am I hearing? Is this a joke? Can’t you just dump that big boy? He’ll take care of himself”.

‘Listen, Michael. Let me get this straight__I am not going anywhere without Ronnie, you get that?’

“Loud and clear. This is what I get for risking my life and robbing a bank off a million dollars and dreaming of starting a grand new life with you and what do I get in return__the thumbs down, being dumped for a bloody dog. I hate you, you bitch.”

©neelanilpanicker2017 #SPF #fiction #150words

8 thoughts on “neelwrites/spf/dogs&bitches/150words/10/07/2017

  1. I don’t think it’s going to go too well for the dude here, Neel.

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    1. Looks like that is the case here, Varad.


  2. For some women it’s “love me, love my dog.”


  3. The story read very realistically.

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  4. Dogs before frogs! 🙂 Good story, Neel.

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  5. Dog or no dog, I think she better stay away from Michael if he’s robbed a bank. This sounds a bit like Bonnie and Clyde minus the dog. Good writing, Neel. 🙂 — Suzanne


  6. Ah well, he gets the money to himself. He should drive off and leave her. But on the other hand, the dog could be a great guard, and he should stop being so selfish.


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