FFfAW Challenge-Week of May 23, 2017
his week’s photo prompt is provided by Louise with The Storyteller’s Abode. Thank you Louise!
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CATCH 22
By Neel Anil Panicker
Cute little kids, their visages plastered in smiles, shrieked around tossing frisbies into the air, a few even settling down to the rather serious business of building castles, their feet half submerged in the watery grave that had formed around the sandy beach.
Behind them the sea snuggled up to the shore in slow rhythmic waves, bringing with it small little tortoise shells, giant crabs, and even the odd discarded water bottle.
Quaint small little boats bobbed around like candy floss in the crystal blue oceanic waters as the horizon beyond lit up in a flashy orb, occasionally sending out brown strobes of light that fell on the glistening bodies of the evening revelers.
Al sidled upto Karen and kissed her on the cheek. Jet black hair fell on her forehead half hiding her beautiful face.
Watching her a wave of remorse swept through Al.
Dammit! How could he do this to her? How could he cheat on his wife?
His boss’s words hit him like a sledgehammer: ‘You’re mine or I call the police.’
©neelanilpanicker2017 #FFfAW #fiction #175words
I did not see that coming! Great read. Great scenario building. After reading the first 3 paragraphs it felt like I was there.
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Thanks Shivam
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blackmail and he succumbed to it. did he have a choice?
You have painted the vista so well that i was transported to the idyllic beach.
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No, he didn’t have any choice. Battle of the sexes? Power equations have changed, it seems. Thanks Kalpana for your appreciation.
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Definitely a Catch 22, and no easy way out of it.
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Yes, no easy way out. Thanks Lian.
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Trapped!
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Wow, I’m amazed at your knack of creating a base for the suspense endings you treat us to. Well done Neel 🙂
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That was very kind of you, Kitty. Thanks
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Welcome Neel 🙂
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Whoops! Great twist.
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Thanks Athling.
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And everything was going so smoothly! Great twist. You play with fire and you will get burnt! I’d say he’s burning right now and there’s no easy answer for him.
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Thanks
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now he’s got himself in a right pickle.
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