AN EVENING IN MOSCOW ( 175 words)
By Neel Anil Panicker
The man retrieved the paper out of his shirt pocket, and read its contents__one more time.
Half past six. St. Basil’s Cathedral. West Entrance. Black bag. Ten million dollars.
He opened the ice box.
‘Nothing like Johnnie Walker. Best antidote for frayed nerves.’
A lifetime lived out of hotels had given Liam Yang Lee, Chief Liasion Agent of the People’s Republic of China a yen for the high life.
Two pegs down and he was all set for the rendezvous.
A minute minute later a diminutive man with an odd limp stepped out of the revolving glass doors of Moscow Hotel. As the cool foggy December evening air around Red Square hit him with a fury, the man instinctively pulled the collars of his Armani leather jacket. His other hand held an off-white duffel bag.
Across the street and a hundred feet above, atop a highrise right above the ever busy Beluga Caviar Bar, a man turned his gaze into the telescopic lens, took aim and fired.
A President’s secrets, especially America’s, don’t sell cheap.
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Wickedly entertaining story Neel! Your precise word choice adds interesting nuance to the tale.
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I thought given the climate of wickedness around us of late this would be an appropriate spy tale. Thank you so much for your appreciation.
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Great spy thriller scene Neel, loved it,
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Thought this would be appropriate given the US-China faceoff and the increased global disquiet.
Thanks Lain for your very kind comments.
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I want more of this story….
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well done…
and I am assuming it was Johnny Walker Red (not black) I mean – for the red square and all (kidding)
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Yes, definitely true. This one looks as if it would do with some more telling. Even i am curious as to what happens next. Yes, Red, for sure.
Thanks a lot for your very kind words, Prior.
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thanks for the reply – and who knows if the rest of the story will unfold at some other point.
have a nice saturday….
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Dear Neel,
Your sharp descriptions had me there turning my own collar to the wind. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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