By Neel Anil Panicker

‘Asshole, he should have told me this”, Clare swore under her breath. She stepped off the steps and stood against the rocky edges. She looked up to see how far below she had come. Loomed above a staircase to the skies.

‘I should have stayed at the Visitors Center, ’ she muttered to herself.

“Madam, this is no way to see the world’s best waterfall. You need to take those steps…feel the rush of fresh icy waters gently slapping around your wrists. You need to…”

She had cut short his spiel.

“Ok, I am going down”.

 ‘Lovely view this, isn’t it?’  

The roar of the waters below seared through her ears.

Clare looked sideways at the owner of the silvery voice. She dutifully followed his gaze.

Some fifty feet below and encircled by blackish lava rocks, the glacial waters had turned a milky white.

The guide’s words rang in her ears, “As you approach the falls, the crevice is obscured from view, so that it appears that a mighty river simply vanishes into the earth.”

‘Would you like to see that from close?’

It was an offer she just couldn’t refuse.

Albert had just found his victim number 9.



What Pegman Saw is a weekly fiction prompt utilizing Google Maps. The assignment is to write a story–150 words or less–based upon your own street view tour, using the location link provided.

Flash fiction is a valuable training tool for all writers. It helps promote clarity and precision by forcing the writer to be succinct.

A new What Pegman Saw prompt will be posted every Friday at midnight CST in the Locations section. Have fun, and do your best always.

Gullfoss Waterfall

Google Streetview of Gulfoss Waterfall


This week’s location was suggested by gifted writer and photographer Graham over at Thanks Graham!

This story was written for :


4 thoughts on “neelwrites/fiction/shortstory/googlestreetview/30/12/2016

  1. Dear Neel,

    I had a feeling he was up to no good. Nicely done.



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  2. Well done — the tension is there in the story until the ending. Builds up well.

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  3. Thanks, Helen — I was thinking of when I used to try and sneak in well after my curfew. Though we didn’t have security cameras, lol. Just my mother’s supersonic hearing when I was up to something.

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    1. Sorry Neel — left response at wrong spot!.


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