neelwrites/fiction/shortstory/blacktea,withoutsugar/29/11/2016

FFfAW Challenge – Week of November 29, 2016

Black tea, without sugar

By Neel Anil Panicker

With a tea pot filled to the brim with delectable Earl Grey mint flavoured black tea, Melania Roberts settled down on her high backed comfy leather lined chair.

Extricating the single sheet of paper from the table drawer, she held its contents against the white strobes of early morning sun that lighted up the soft exquisite interiors of her ornate Gothic-era bedroom.

She knew orgasmic joy was a heartbeat away; her mind’s eye visualised beautifully arched, at times curvy, often ramrod straight lines flowing with words that would leap out and thrust into her heart’s cavities.

My dear Mel, it has been my great pleasure to have known and loved you. The fragrance of those beautiful times that we have shared shall always remain with me. (Oh! How wonderful were those midnight trysts in the hotel!).

However, of late, I have come to the acutely painful realisation that Roberts for a surname has a nice little ring to it.  I suggest you stick to it.

Goodbye and stay blessed.

Paul Huckman

word count: 173

(c)neelanilpanciker2016#fiction#shortstory

 

Written in response to photo prompt from

https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/

Guide for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers

1. A prompt photo will be provided each Tuesday to be used as a base to your story. Please include photo prompt with your story.

2. Linking for this challenge begins on Tuesday and runs to the following Monday evening.

3. Please credit photo to photographer.

4. The story word limit is 100 – 150 words (+ – 25 words). Please try and stay within this limit.

5. Pingback to the challenge post in your story’s post.

6. This is a flash fiction challenge (stories in 100-175 words or less) and each story should have a beginning, a middle, and an end. Therefore, no serial (continuation) stories. They become too complicated for our readers.

7. Add your story to the InLinkz Link-up (Blue Froggy button). If you need link-up instructions, please email me at mepricelessjoy@gmail.com.

8. Please keep stories below R rating.

9. Please respect the diversity of our readers and writers in regard to race, religion, and life style choice when writing your stories.

10. Remember, half the fun is reading and commenting on each other’s stories.

16 thoughts on “neelwrites/fiction/shortstory/blacktea,withoutsugar/29/11/2016

  1. Wow but what a reason to stay married…most interesting response Neel.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Yes indeed. And what a good reason to end it all. Thanks Michael for your appreciation.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. michael1148humphris

    Letters bring joy and pain in equal amounts. Love your take on the prompt

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Very true Michael. Letters are a two edged sword. One should open then with a lot of care. Thank you for the appreciative comments.

      Like

  3. What a cad! She’s better off without him I’m sure 🙂 And better off keeping her name too

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Oh, very true. She deserves much better. Thank you so much Lynn for your appreciation.

      Liked by 2 people

      1. My pleasure Neel 🙂

        Like

  4. Great story, Neel! She ended the affair with a Dear John letter. My question is, who is Paul Huckman? Is that the real name of the letter writer? Was he and Mel having an affair and acting out fantasies?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thanks Priceless Joy for your appreciation. Paul Huckman could be his name or even his pseudo name. With a guy like him one can never be sure. A real cad he is!

      Like

      1. He sure is! LOL! Great story!

        Like

  5. What a deflating put down at the end! Great letter – and a freat take on the prompt. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. THANKS Kelly. JUST confused, did you mean great take on prompt or freak take…

      Liked by 1 person

      1. I meant great take, just a typo. Could freak take apply too?! 🙂

        Like

  6. It depends on whether it works or not. If it works then it cannot be called a freak, isn’t it?

    Like

  7. Interesting take to the prompt; nicely done. I like that the gentleman was willing to let her go when it knew it was best.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you Athling for your appreciation. Yes, i do think he was gentlemanly in the way he ended it, at least on paper.

      Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: