FFfAW Challenge – Week of November 15, 2016


By Neel Anil Panicker

‘Boss, he is dead. Bangkok is all yours’.

Robert flicked off the phone. A smile escaped his lips. One more enemy eliminated. One more territory annexed.

He looked down and caught a mass of rippling muscles eyeing him through azure waters.

Time to celebrate; time for a swim. That too in the nude. Who cares? This was his own den.

He placed his trusted Beretta 96A1 on the rocks and dived into the waters.

The icy cool waters welcomed him with a loud splash.

An eerie stillness followed. Soon the waters turned red.

Bangkok just got a new owner.


7 thoughts on “neelwrites/fridayfictionforaspiringwriters/20/11/2016

  1. Excellent story, full if intrigue and violence. Well done.

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    1. Thanks Kelly. So glad you liked it.

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  2. Wonderful story Neel! Filled with mystery with a chilling ending! Loved how it ended with, “Bangkok just got a new owner.”

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    1. Thank you so much, Priceless Joy. That comment was indeed priceless.

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  3. michael1148humphris

    As they say, you live by the sword you will die by the sword.


    1. T hat’s so very true, Michael. And thanks for stopping by and reading. Much appreciated.


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