He’s gone – Weekly Writing Challenge #59
Five Words: [ GONE – SENSE – TRACE – VOICE – PATH ]
By Neel Anil Panicker
Ask me what happens when your love is gone
Does it make sense who is there and who has flown?
the world is the same and so are you and so is your path
Ask me what happens when your love is gone
when someone leaves without a trace
suddenly slows down life’s lively pace
Ask me what happens when your love is gone
Does it make sense who is there and who has flown?
(c) neelanilpanicker 2016
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oh, I love your poem, Neel 🙂 the repetitiion is just right and the mood is melancholic and poignant. brilliant!
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Thank you so much. Your kind words of appreciation are like a Godsend.
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Wow, good.
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Thank you, Delyn
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