neeelwritesblog/He’s gone – Weekly Writing Challenge #59/25/10/2016

He’s gone – Weekly Writing Challenge #59

Five Words: [ GONE – SENSE – TRACE – VOICE – PATH ]

By Neel Anil Panicker

Ask me what happens when your love is gone

Does it make sense who is there and who has flown?

the world is the same and so are you and so is your path

Ask me what happens when your love is gone

when someone leaves without a trace

suddenly slows down life’s lively pace

Ask me what happens when your love is gone

Does it make sense who is there and who has flown?

(c) neelanilpanicker 2016

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4 thoughts on “neeelwritesblog/He’s gone – Weekly Writing Challenge #59/25/10/2016

  1. oh, I love your poem, Neel 🙂 the repetitiion is just right and the mood is melancholic and poignant. brilliant!

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    1. Thank you so much. Your kind words of appreciation are like a Godsend.

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