neelwrites.blog#tanka#01

Posted on by neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS

Summer days kiss winter nights
Hope swells in young hearts
Passions float in every boat

Image result for summer and beer
Eyes gleam, faces glow, lips part
Say cheers with raised mugs of beer.

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5 thoughts on “neelwrites.blog#tanka#01”

  1. neelwrites.blog#tanka#01 | neelwritesblog
    September 28, 2016 at 4:25 pm

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  2. kiwinana
    September 28, 2016 at 7:03 pm

    That’s a good start for a first tanka poem. Looking forward to your future posts.

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    1. neelwritesblog
      September 30, 2016 at 2:13 pm

      Thanks for the appreciation

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  3. jac forsyth
    September 29, 2016 at 5:34 pm

    ‘Summer days kiss winter nights’ what an awesome opening line. Great tanka.

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    1. neelwritesblog
      September 30, 2016 at 2:14 pm

      Thanks for the appreciation.

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